About Charlie

Nova Posts : 41 Join date : 2008-01-11

Let's start a new topic on this new born character! Who is she? We don't really know yet but we already know she seems pretty fascinating! Let's wait and see study

(and read)
As for me I really liked reading a starting frag in a plane, it gives a very dynamic impression about this character.

Subject: Re: About Charlie Sat Mar 29, 2008 9:10 pm

Yes, a very dynamic impression ! I'm waiting the third frag ! So, she's a glaswegian journalist ? Which film did she see recently, this thriller she's talking about ? Razz

PS to Mesarthim : take care, when you publicate fragments, to the line of spaces. It's not necessary to put one after the title, and dont put two lines after the fragments. (and it lacks one after the separation line...) Very Happy

Subject: Re: About Charlie Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:33 pm

I like to see a character working (or thinking to his work). I also like to see all these moments of his life (breakfast, music, mails...). And i want to know more about Paul Razz

Ink Star Posts : 18 Join date : 2008-03-27

Well, at least I gave you the title of the thriller!! ^^

Subject: Re: About Charlie Tue Apr 01, 2008 6:13 pm

It would have been so funny for us to see her in a broken lift Very Happy

PS to MESARTHIM : You have to check the different spaces before and after every single line of separation :S

Nova Posts : 41 Join date : 2008-01-11

so what is the rule actually about the separation lines?

About Charlie: great to see her at work Very Happy

Nova Posts : 41 Join date : 2008-01-11

'_' This is such a powerful fragment, your last one... I don't know what to think... How can she still go on with life after such a thing?? pale

Subject: Re: About Charlie Thu Apr 03, 2008 9:03 am

Oh shit

I red it to...

Ink Star Posts : 18 Join date : 2008-03-27

Hum, Altaïr, if I may correct you, you would rather say : "oh shit, I read it too." Wink

Concerning Charlie... well. In a way, I'm happy of your reaction because it means that my frag is written correctly. And on the character, I would just say what I already told Mesarthim: Charlie has got a weakness, like the others, and that's hers.

Nova Posts : 41 Join date : 2008-01-11

I would have corrected as well, but didn't dare Wink

just want to say I think it betrays how Alti has been belwidered as I have been. And yes, it is amazingly well written, this how I felt that much touched by Charlie's story...

Nova Posts : 41 Join date : 2008-01-11

Just so painfully sad, this 7th frag... Yet she is surrounded by great people, which is good... (I thought Paul woud be younger and would'nt be living in Glasgow, it's surprising, I love it Wink

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Subject: Re: About Charlie Fri Apr 04, 2008 2:24 am

Alhena wrote:: Hum, Altaïr, if I may correct you, you would rather say : "oh shit, I read it too."

> That's what i said Very Happy

Subject: Re: About Charlie Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:50 am

So... Bob, Cameron, Paul... Three men to take care of her right now. I think that's a good thing. The seemed so strong at the beginning... how could have we imagined she had lived such a thing ?

Nova Posts : 41 Join date : 2008-01-11

But seeing her that strong actually could have made us foresee something like this: what doesn't kill you makes you stronger... Though I didn't have imagined something this painfull and horrible Sad

Subject: Re: About Charlie Sun Apr 06, 2008 10:39 pm

I like very much this complicity between Charlie and Cameron, and the fact they choose one music every day Smile

Nova Posts : 41 Join date : 2008-01-11

Nice to read about their visit in Saint Andrews! And the Scottish weather, so changing: it reminds me good memories Smile

Subject: Re: About Charlie Mon Apr 07, 2008 11:56 am

It snowed this night in Paris two... and today, a great sun in the sky... Where are the seasons ?...
Well, that's great we can read what she write for her job Smile

And we learn more and more about Cameron and Paul, and always the musics... It's very coherent, i like it Smile